ROUGH CUT OF OUR MUSIC VIDEO

This is a rough cut of the first 1 minute 41 seconds of our music video. We decided to make a rough cut in order for us to gain a better understanding of what areas of the music video we should improve on. The only way we would know how we should improve would be by showing our target audience a version of our rough cut and by them commenting on the video via social networking sites such as YouTube and Facebook.

Below our the comments I received: